Writing...

So I once again find myself revising an unfinished story. This a story I've been working on since High School. Basically something I work on a bit, put away and pick up a year later. I've revised what I've written at least 3 times before. This time I however feel like I am truely making it better. FIrst off their are less typos and such, I think.

Original version of the begining of the story.
Revised version of the above.

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I'm tired, cold and at work. It's cold in the office. I don't think the heat is on. I don't know where the controls are to check it. Although it being cold has helped me stay awake this evening. :)

Sometime this week I should be getting Crimson Skies for the X-Box from GameFly. Ever since I saw the first preview for this game on X-Play I have been waiting to get my hands on it. It just looks so damn cool.

Speaking of GameFly. Despite my initial misgivings I have become quite happy with the service. It is a great way for me to be able to rent games. I just wish their turnaround time was closer to that of NetFlix. NetFlix usually takes 2-3 days to get to them and 2-3 to get to me. GameFly on the other hand takes 3-5 to get to them and 3-5 to get back to me.

In the office there is a small Christmas tree with blinking lights on it. Due to where I sit I keep catching glimpses of it out of the corner of my eye. Very distracting and annoying.